Sample Research Paper

Based on the Sample paper there are some things i will take from this paper and other negative aspects i will not. The fact that the writer used too many "I" in her paper made me aware of not doing that. I will try and steer of  clear of writing from my perspective. I will keep in mind that using "I" once or twice is acceptable.A positive part of her paper was the great use of quote sandwiches. I will try and use as many strong quote sandwiches as possible in my research paper. Also another positive was the good structure of her paper and I will try and make my research paper as organized as possible. The writer used good repeatable sources not poor sources like Wikipedia etc.