ENG 103 Final Draft Planning

After handing in my preliminary draft, i now see it needs a lot of improvement. Firstly, i need to focus on paraphrasing and missing cites from my paper. It is hard to be able to know what to paraphrase and what not to. I will now need to double check my draft and see what paraphrases i need to fix. I also need to focus on the length of my paper. I was fully aware of the fact that my final paper needs to be longer because my preliminary draft was not finished. I need to build a stronger argument with more examples of my idea. I also need to think of which two scenes of my film that i will focus in on and explain. When I received this draft it really helped me see the little mistakes that i made and the improvements that my final paper still needs.